Sunday, 14 June 2009

my favourite subject

This semester my favourite subject is forensic psychology. The teacher who teache it is Carolina Villagra, but there are other psychologics invited as well who are expert at subject as Elias Escaff, Svenska Arensburg, Claudia Capella or Carolina Viano.
I like this because I think that the victims of crimes need a lot of psychological help. And this area makes a huge contribution to understand the nature of crime and the human behaviors. I hope so make a contribution to the social problems and help the people to live with traumatic experience and colaborated to identify the causes relationated with why the individuals to commit the criminal ofensses. I think that the forensic psychologics are very important inside the Psychology in nowadays and our legal system because we are in the middle of the reforms that search improve the justice and punishment relationated with the crime. Also the victimology is one of the areas in wich I am very interested and In the future I wanna work in CAVAS, Center of help to victims to sexual abuse. I hope to help in some mesure... bye.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Elvira, very interesting.

    Some important suggestions:

    The sentence "The teacher who teache it is Carolina Villagra, but there are other psychologics invited as well who are expert at subject as Elias Escaff..." has some problems. It should be,

    " The teacher who teacheS it is Carolina Villagra, but there are other psychologics invited as well expertS ON THE subject as Elias Escaff, Svenska Arensburg, Claudia Capella or Carolina Viano."

    You say, "I like this because" or "I LIKE IT BECAUSE"' Also,

    you say, "I hope TO MAKE" not "so make a contribution"

    - "The causes relationated" or THE CAUSES RELATED... with what?

    - You don´t say, "I hope to help in some mesure", you say, I hope to be helpful"

    Please, edit your post.

    You get 1.5 points.

    Paula

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